(1)大作文高分应试论证素材篇

今年的大作文根据这几年的出题规律,无疑跟当前的时事和流行话题不无关系,对于已经习惯模板的同学们来说,三段式的大作文写作当中,首段写法大多数同学都能掌握,甚至写得非常流畅。

但是,到了第二段的论证分析和说明部分,也就是大作文最重要的分值考量部分,大多数同学却不能给出非常有力的论证素材,而是用一些比较牵强的理由进行千篇一律地论述,即便没有出现语法错误,逻辑上没有瑕疵,也只能获得一个较低的分数,无法在作文这一板块上拉开差距,体现优势。只有恰当地联系现实,尤其是用当下流行的时事话题进行例证,才会起到非常好的论证效果,从而提高整体大作文的得分。

一、人民至上,生命至上people first, life first(用于众志成城;团结一致,奉献精神,以人为本的话题)

The phrase, "peoplefirst, life first" came from China's fight against the pandemic, a massivenationwide effort that meant no place was left behind and no life was given upon.

From a 30-hour-old babyto senior citizens over 100 years old, no cost was spared to save a life, andall the treatment was free. Now the pandemic has been put under effectivecontrol in China, and sporadic or cluster cases in a few regions were allcurbed veryquickly

疫情肆虐时,我们前所未有调集全国资源、举国同心开展最严格、最全面、最彻底的大规模科学防控和救治,不放弃每一个角落,不放弃每一个生的希望,从出生仅 30 个小时的婴儿到 100 多岁的老人,不计代价,全力免费救治。目前, 疫情在中国全境得到有效控制,局部地区出现散发病例或聚集性疫情,都能迅速得到遏制。

二、逆行者 heroes in harm's way(用于勇气,勇敢等话题)

Being popular during China's efforts to control the pandemic was thesaying ni xing zhe, or "heroes in harm's way", which refers toeveryday heroes such as medical professionals, military personnel andfirefighters who put their duty before their lives and made sacrifices to fightthe pandemic.

逆行者是指在抗疫过程中那些不惧风险、迎难而上、无私奉献的人物群体。他们中有从全国各地奔赴疫情一线、与时间赛跑、跟病毒搏击、抢救生命的医护工作者、解放军、消防员

三、躺平 lieflat(家庭关系、啃老,逃避责任,逃避现实等话题)The buzzword, tang ping,or "lie flat", describes Chinese youngsters who have little ambitionand do the bare minimum to get by. Itturns out that the "lie-flatters"are from well-off families, born with a silver spoonin their mouths, or believe that whatever happens to them, they have basicmedical insurance, pension and unemployment subsidies to fall back on.This is totallydifferent from previous generations, who didn't have the luxury to “lie flat”, because they had to tighten their belts and work hard to earn a living, adding that younger people are facing greaterpressure than older generations when it comes to employment.

Most people don'tapprove of the "lie-flatters", who they believe are self-centered,and have greater respect for the "heroes in harm's way".

躺平指一些年轻人放弃奋斗、不思进取,他们或逃避竞争、低欲望生活,或不想工作、回家啃老,类似美国的归巢族。选择躺平的人,有的家境比较优越,一出生就躺赢;有的认为不管怎样,都有国家基本医疗、失业保险和养老保险等兜底。这和他们的父辈不同,那时,家家户户没有这么好的条件,社会资源紧缺, 凭票购物,想躺平也没条件,只能奋斗。另一方面,与父辈相比,这一代年轻人面临着更大的压力和竞争,如就业、职场、住房、生育等等。人们更崇尚逆行者。

四、内卷 Involution(压力,就业,教育,心理健康等话题)

"involution", a buzzword , meansirrational or involuntary competition, which makes people feel burned out.

内卷这个热词意味着不理性和非自愿的竞争,让深陷其中的人们感觉筋疲力尽。

五、双减 doublereduction(压力,就业,教育,心理健康等话题)

The policy , doublereduction ,reduced the excessive homework load and after-school tutoring hours forstudents, giving them more time for sports, play and hobbies. This is why most parents felt a burden had beenlifted when education authorities rolled out shuang jian, or double reduction.

双减政策的实行减少了学生们过多的家庭作业负担和课后补习时间,让孩子们可以有更多时间参与到体育运动,玩耍和兴趣爱好上。这也是为什么大多数父母会感觉到在教育部门开展双减政策后,负担有所减轻的原因。

六 、压力相关话题(就业压力,学业压力,考研压力,心理健康等)的第二段例证及第三段展望的万能C+D 模板

(C) Inaddition,thepressureofemploymentisincreasinglyintense.Thefactthat even well-educated people are confrontedwith unemployment problems urges children(people,graduate,college student)to obtain more skills and becomemore versatile so as to becompetitive on the job market. (D)From the above discussion, Ican easily come to a conclusion thatchildren

(people,people,graduate,college student)do live under more pressure than before. Thus thesociety should create more opportunities and reform our educational system tohelp children(people)enjoy happy childhood(life).

七、 减压的方式(第二段或者第三段高分素材)Many techniques arerecommended to relieve stress. There are some that work most effectively. Thefirst one is looking at the positives. Instead of complaining  about what we do not possess, think of whatwe have in our lives. It could help us stay calmer in a stressful situation.The second one is going on a vacation. It can be very good to relieve thestress that is plaguing us. The third one is regular exercise. We can go mountain hiking, play tennis, orget involved in some other sports activities. When we do exercise, thechemicals released from our body could help us reducestress.Though stress isinevitable, we can relieve it to a level which is beneficial to us.

Therefore,finding effective ways to relievestress can make our life more delightful.

八、 内卷(压力)时代相关词汇及话题收集

(英语二请注意这几种变化走向)(英语一可以用作具体论证)

 1.大学生毕业就业变化图(私有企业,国有企业,合资企业,研究生学院) 

The change of employment of university graduate (private firms, state-owned firms,joint ventures, graduate schools) 2.某高校心理健康重要性调查

A survey ofcollege students attach importance to mental health.  3.我国IT(某某)企业员工评均工作时间长The  average  working hours  that  employees  of  IT    (information

technology)company spent in China

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(2)考研英语大作文考前急救篇

九、48 小时考前江湖救急文①What a compelling andthought-provoking drawing it is! ②As is vividlydepicted in the cartoon above,描述1 . ③What impresses me most is that (=The most striking feature of the drawing is that)描述2(图画重点信息). ④Simple as the image is, theimplications mirrored are apparently (conspicuously) far-reaching.(英语一第一段)The result of a survey about 调查对象in a certain city(college,company) is clearly shown in the graph(chart, table)above.As we can see from the graph(chart, table), the proportion of( 对象一)takes up for(  数据一     %), thatof   (    对象二及数据二    )% (英语二第一段) (第二段)Thereisnodenyingthatseveralfactorsmaypromotesuchaphenomenon of the figures, and listing some representative ones is of greatnecessity. On the macro level, undoubtedly, with the development of the societyresulting in the coming of high technology and rapid growth, we are apt to basethe phenomenon that a growing numberof          图表(图画)中对象      tendto(     根据图表(图画)判断           )   .On the micro level, according to Maslow's hierarchyofneeds,afterthebasicneedsof图表(图画引申)中对象  ,especiallyin developing countries, like physiologicaland safety needs, have been met, they begin tolookforsomethingmorespiritual,suchas    and so on. Specifically, 涉及主题       layasolidfoundationforpersonaldevelopment.(英语一,英语二可用) (第三段)From what I have discussed above, we can come to the conclusion

thatsucha phenomenonpresentedinthegraph,chart,table(英语二)cartoon,picture,drawing)(英语一)isunderstandable,butthingswillturnintotheiroppositeswhenreachingtheextreme,sotakingarationalattitudetowards                                                              涉及主题is alwaysthebestpolicy(英语一,英语二可用)

十、消极因素分析的快速上手写法

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(3)考研英语小作文考前救急篇

十一、小作文道歉信

假设你是一商场的主管,有顾客投诉所购买商品有瑕疵,请你写封信给对方,征求他人谅解。Dear Mrs. Wang,

As the manager of themarketing department, I am writing this letter to make an apology to you foryour terrible shopping experience.First of all, after receiving the product yousent back last week, we arranged an engineer to make an overall check on it andfound that there was a missing screw at the bottom of the product. In order tomake up our fault, we will deliver a new one to you and give you some couponsof our online shop as compensation. Alternatively, we can return you the twiceamount of cash you paid for this product.Once again, I feel so sorry for anyinconvenience caused. Please accept my sincere apologies.

十二、小作文请求信

假设你是一名学生,你希望你的老师能够推荐你去你心仪的企业工作,请写一封信给对方,征求下对方的意见。Dear Mr. Smith,I’m Li Ming from yourEnglish writing class last semester. Having been applying to work in a foreigncompany recently, I’m writing to ask you for help.So eager am I to have anopportunity to work in this foreign company that I have studied hard during myschool years and won several first-class scholarships. With my applicationletter and resume completed, I am not quite sure of the language and the formatI have used. On top of that, a perfect application letter and resume can play adecisive role in my admission to the world-renowned company.Therefore, I willextremely appreciate it if you could take a look over them and make some necessarychanges. Please kindly find my application letter and resume in the attachment.Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

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小作文,请同学们还可以关注招聘启事以及备忘录。最后的备考时间也是黄金时间,希望同学们在最后的黄金 48 小时里能够抓住考前重点,做好参加考试的充分准备, 沉着应考,冷静作答。最后,在此祝大家都能够顺利上岸,找到心之所向,相约在高处。加油!